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The magic day it all happend!!!

Today it was a magic day because a guy came to our school and his name was mac ryan he was a biker at the Olympics. He had a black jacket with colorful lines on it it looked cool and how I mean cool it is really cool.We ask a lot of questions the one that I ask was where did he train he reply to all of questions WOW what a man replying to all those people who ask him questions.We learned that his bike does not have brakes and if you need to slow down you have to push back on the wheels. ~ Made by Roxy ~

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We are moving!!!

   

                                        WE HAVE MOVED!!!

Yesterday we moved to the new building although i was not here yesterday. I heard my best friend say to me last night that we had moved at first I did not believe her and then when I came to school we came into the new building was full of children from different classes and that is when I started to believe her. I think that the teachers are awesome here are some photo's of them.

I also like how we will be collaborating altogether as a team. What I am worried about is the toilet's problem with the girl and the boys but no doubt they will  be solved soon.