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My monster BUBBLES

    

              Today  my group read a book about a little girl that loved to draw and she drawed a monster and
              her teacher who loved to draw aswell as the little girl.They were both good drawers they both drawed a monster and when we read that book we drawed a monster and this is my monster                                          

lovly toast

First get the toaster and plug it in the wall then switch it on and don’t forget to put the bread in the toaster.

Next get the  cheese and spaghetti toppings.

Then take out The bread from the toaster.

2 to last  get the toast out and put the toppings on to the toast.

Lasty the yummy bit eat it [yum]

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ROXANNES MARAE TRIP

Roxanne’s trip to the marae

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It was a sunny day on Wednesday. I went to a marae called Ngati moki.

First we went on a bus to the exciting marae.The marae was big, I thought it looked Powerful.

Second we waited at the gate Fiona welcomed us into the mare.The caller said some things back I could not understand it.

Then we went in the marae. Fiona sang a song. We had a snack there was a playground there. I was surprised of all the stuff.The food in my lunch was nice. Gilberthorpe school sang a song that I think they knew because they were lip singing it.Then we did our mihi. Finally it was time for lunch I played on the playground then it was time to go back inside.

It was time to go home the bus would not come until it was time to go home if we were at school we would be like one minute late.When we got back to my mum said’ where were you ‘  I said at the marae she told me that she had been there for agers

I said at least you weren’t late so that is lucky.