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Thursday, November 10, 2016

The marshmallow monster

we are learning to write a narotive.

One spooky Halloween night a little boy called Dylan went by himself in the deep dark woods The wind was  howling like hell.Dylan stop’s he hair’s something behind him.A marshmallow monster he says what do I do,what do i do as well as holding a marshmallow.The marshmallow monster saw the marshmallow he started to poke his tongue out.Dylan though the marshmallow and the monster went to go and get it.The marshmallow monster saw another one and eat it.The boy that had the marshmallow  gave one more to the monster if  he would do a dance for it.Before he got scared he made the stick into  a wappan to protect him. He asked himself was that a good chose to come here.Bongbong he jumped for more.

How do I get him away from me? Why don't I throw him in the water? that won't work he is to heavy He had one more last marshmallow There was no more marshmallow so he was getting so angry so he was chasing him then bong he failed  his feet got stuck there was one more he dreamed   then  called Dylan through the marshmallow in that mean time he  run for his life then the monster saw a march mallo so he put near the frier boch it went he was so sad.


                                          THE END


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